Peer Review: Jiacheng Wang
Hi Jiacheng, great work! Very interesting article, and I must agree, it’s not easy coming away from an environmental course without a hopeless outlook on how man interacts with the environment! The only suggestions I have is that I would add a bit more on how you feel about the article, not just a summary of it. Also, there were a few grammar errors. I have always found the site Grammarly helpful, and very easy to use. You upload your paper and it makes suggestions, not always correct, but it catches things we miss.
Again, great work!
-Angela Moenich