correction in essay on the reunion by John Cheever

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need help in improving the essay

I currently received 82% for the paper attached below, need help in getting 90% or above  


the teachers comments say that I need to focus more on the themes related to the story instead of paraphrasing it so much 


instructions and 1st draft of the essay is attached below 


 link for the story


https://genius.com/John-cheever-reunion-annotated


some good content on the themes can be found here


http://sittingbee.com/reunion-john-cheever/ 



  • Posted: 16 days ago
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