Effective Communication in the Workplace (Military)

Effective Communication in the workplace.  Attached is a drafted that need to be revised of this assignment labeled "Capstone Draft 1).  I need a revision on this and all instructions are attached.  Please provide a more in dept written paper of the requirement.  I will attach a template and a guide to follow.  All writing need to be in APA 7th edition, Times New Roman 12 Font, double spaced.