Hi Fathi, 

I am emailing in regards to your A4, as at this stage it is not at a pass standard. We have spoken in detail this semester and in the previous semester in regards to appropriate referencing, yet you have not included enough supporting evidence in your essay for all of the ideas you include. Each idea in your essay needs to be supported by evidence including an in-text citation. I suggest you seek help through ALLSP or the library with your referencing. 

As we have spoken about this issue on several previous occasions, you may have one final chance to resubmit your essay on a pass/fail basis. As a reminder your submitted work needs to be all your own work. 

  • Posted: a month ago
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