write poems
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Rewrite/revise the three poems you’ve produced so far, incorporating all the techniques we have studied up to this point. Revise in layers—read through your poem and focus exclusively on clarity and conflict; read again and focus exclusively on imagery; read again and focus exclusively on musical language; read again and focus exclusively on line breaks. Be bold and unsparing with your revisions. Start again from scratch if you need to or prefer. Poems to revise:
POEM 1: A Childhood Memory *OR* Exercise 5.5: Revision or rewrite based on a single image
POEM 11: A Brief Descriptive Poem
POEM 19: Family Snapshot