Revision for a research paper on OLD MAN AND SEA

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When the teacher sent the paper back requesting revisions, here is what he said:
1. Take out the things about the other books.
2. So what he wants is to STICK to the book itself.
    - add more details from the book in order to make the point and to prove the thesis.
    - add more QUOTES from the book. 
    - link everything back to the thesis statement. 
3. And make length be 9-10 pages.
 
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