Revision for a research paper on OLD MAN AND SEA
student.xWhen the teacher sent the paper back requesting revisions, here is what he said:
1. Take out the things about the other books.
2. So what he wants is to STICK to the book itself.
- add more details from the book in order to make the point and to prove the thesis.
- add more QUOTES from the book.
- link everything back to the thesis statement.
3. And make length be 9-10 pages.
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