Revision Needed for Phyllis Young

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DUE APRIL 3RD 8:00 A.M E.S.T

TEACHERS COMMENTS ABOUT PAPER

You are not writing in a conversational manner and much of what was written feels like an attempt to write above your audience.  Your sentences don’t need to have  “fancy” words, or be written in such a way to make them sound more “scholarly”.  Simply state your thoughts and I think you will end up with a more readable paper that meets the requirements of the assignment.

 

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