Revision Needed for Phyllis Young
vwccspt12DUE APRIL 3RD 8:00 A.M E.S.T
TEACHERS COMMENTS ABOUT PAPER
You are not writing in a conversational manner and much of what was written feels like an attempt to write above your audience. Your sentences don’t need to have “fancy” words, or be written in such a way to make them sound more “scholarly”. Simply state your thoughts and I think you will end up with a more readable paper that meets the requirements of the assignment.
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