REVISING A PAPER.

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Here you have a paper that was already written BUT there bistakes that need to be fixed. SO, you have to fix these errors based on the comments. 

HERE YOU HAVE THE COMMENTS. 

 

Please be careful to insert your sources.  You have a definition of poverty, but no source for it.  And it is not the only definition. 

When you cite Gupta, just put (Gupta et al).  The other two authors are in the Works Cited.

You need to discuss the extent of child poverty separately from the causes, and make a better distinction between long term poverty and periodic poverty. You say the level of poverty among families has gone up but give no evidence and no source.  

Don't include the term "social disadvantage" as if it were the same as poverty.  Social disadvantage is an effect of poverty.

As I was saying in class the other day, you sequence of discussion is weak.  Start with prenatal care (the poor diets of mothers is under prenatal care), low birth weight and premature births, and then infant mortality.

The in-text citation should be (Strully et al 535). No comma between author and page number.

You discuss infant mortality but provide no sources. Providing your sources is critical.  

I would not include a separate section on education but include in my conclusion that the challenges faced by children at birth have long term consequences for their educational attainment because of a range of subsequent developmental issues. 

The entry should be "Gupta, Rita Sen-Paul" and the entries should be alphabetized.

Your bibliographic entries should include for web and database sources the data of access, the date you got the material.  You do not include URLs in the entries. ProQuest would not be a print source, even if you print out the article.

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