Phase 4 DB

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Primary Discussion Response is due by Wednesday (11:59:59pm Central), Peer Responses are due by Sunday (11:59:59pm Central).

Get started today. Please post your response into this discussion by Wednesday.

In Unit 3 of the course, you completed your first draft of your essay. This week, you will work on revising your essay based on this peer-review Discussion Board and on your own, using feedback you received from your instructor.

Primary Discussion Response

Choose 1 of your body paragraphs from the first draft you completed in Unit 3 that needs additional development, organizational help, or other revisions. 
In the discussion area, post the following: 

  • Revise the paragraph you selected using a critical eye and what you have learned in intellipath.
  • Under the revised paragraph, list 3–5 bullet points outlining the items you changed in the paragraph you posted. Specify what has been revised. 
  • List any questions you have about the paragraph or any areas you feel still need to be strengthened.
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