Need correcting and added material on my already finished paper

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I got 92% on my rough draft paper that I turned in last week. I want 100 %. My teacher sent back feedback of what I should fix on it. Final paper is due today. All I need is my paper corrected to my teachers liking. I will only assign tutors with 5 STARS!

 


TEACHER'S COMMENT:
Great job on the information for Mayo Clinic and the specific ways they measure data related to patients, admissions, and clinical data.  I think for the final make sure that you provide specific examples of how they measure their data and results for effectiveness.  Overall, great organization and layout to the paper, and formatting as well.

 

 

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