english essay editing


Grading Breakdown

Content: 40-some organizational issues; you spent more time discussing the effects than presenting your examples and your evaluation seemed to spread out over the whole essay instead of one concentrated paragraph

MLA Format/Citations: 12-Works Cited page is correctly formatted but you are still using APA for your in-text citations; date in the header is incorrect 

Grammar and Mechanics: 4


^^ These are the problems in my essay, can someone correct them in two hours ?


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