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As for the structure of the project, I notice that you did not develop the section about the context to include a description of the audience of the movie and a critical analysis of the purpose of the same. How can you tell your readers whom this movie attempted to reach to and what it intended to do to its audience?

 

Your evaluation of the movie is too short. It begins in page three and it stops right there. To be clear, the evaluation of the movie should be the most important part of your project and should occupy the larger space. Therefore, you need to extend the analysis and evaluation of the movie by applying a critical eye to the work of the director, the movie’s purpose, its scenes and aspects. Yes, you started a conversation about cultural diversity and class inequality. Now you need to talk more about that and “show” where in the movie these points are portrayed. Basically, you need to think and ask yourself, how did these social aspects were portrayed in the movie and what they meant to the audience? Was there any controversy about that and did the movie do a good job in talking about these themes?

 

Also, at the end of your project, you did discuss a few production faults. That is a good attempt to talk about what is missing or inaccurate in the movie. Are there any other gaps like that that you could point out? And, what are the impact of them in the way the audience sees the movie?

the text needs to be at least four pages long.

 

 

 

add low level vocab words.

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