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ENGL101-X-1501A-11 Composition and Critical Thinking
Task Name:Phase 4 Individual Project
Deliverable Length:4-paragraph reflection
Details:

Weekly tasks or assignments (Individual Projects) will be due by Monday and late submissions will be assigned a late penalty in accordance with the late penalty policy found in the syllabus. NOTE: All submission posting times are based on midnight Central Time.

Assignment

This week, you have received feedback on your first draft from your instructor, and you have been working through intellipath learning more about the editing process. Next week, you will submit your final draft, which is worth a large portion of your final grade. Completing this assignment will also help you practice the skills of drafting and revising that you will need in your future courses.

For this assignment, write a minimum of 4 paragraphs (each paragraph should have 3–4 sentences) explaining your strategy for completing your final draft based on what you have learned throughout the course and the feedback you have received in intellipath and from your instructor.

Be sure to cover the following:

  • Paragraph 1
    • Discuss the feedback you specifically received on your Phase 3 Draft from your instructor (e.g., grammar issues, incomplete thoughts, additional work to your thesis, and so on).
    • This can be found in the Comments section of the grade book.
  • Paragraph 2
    • Explain how you will adjust your draft based on that feedback.
  • Paragraph 3
    • Discuss the areas in which you have had success in intellipath as well as specific topics you have struggled with throughout the session.
  • Paragraph 4
    • Explain how you can use your strengths within intellipath to create a polished final draft.

 

 

This is all the comment that I has for feedback.

 

Phase 1 intellipath- Your knowledge covered is 100%. Your knowledge state is 74%. Your improvement score is 0/5. These combine to give an overall score of 81%. You can increase your improvement score by doing more practice and revising some nodes. You completed all of the material so you get full credit for your knowledge state of 74%. Your knowledge state values are varied and in different ranges. Your knowledge state for "Understanding the Audience" (75%), "The Paragraph as a Unit of Thought" (95%), "Considering Audience in the Introduction and Conclusion of an Essay" (91%) and "Checking for Appropriateness of Tone and Level of Diction" (85%) is above your average but for "The Function of Introductory and Concluding Paragraphs" (70%), "Thesis Statements for Various Contexts" (64%), "Checking for Words with Appropriate Connotations" (63%), "Creating a Working Thesis Statement" (62%) and "Writing an Effective Thesis Statement" (63%) it is below.

 

Phase 2 intellipath- Your knowledge covered is 71%. Your knowledge state is 72%. Your improvement score is 2/5. These combine to give an overall score of 70%. You can increase your improvement score by doing more practice and revising some nodes. Your knowledge state of 72% has not been used fully for your calculated score because you completed between a half and three quarters of the material. Your knowledge state values are varied and in different ranges. Your knowledge state for "Phase 1: Starting Your Writing Journey" (74%) is above your average but for "Phase 2: Selecting Your Topic & Article Review" (70%) it is below. Try to cover more material in future to get a better calculated score.

 

Phase 3 intellipath- Your knowledge covered is 100%. Your knowledge state is 96%. Your improvement score is 5/5. These combine to give an overall score of 98%. You completed all of the material so you get full credit for your knowledge state of 96%. All of your knowledge state values are in the range 80% to 100%.

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