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In the early morning, in the electronic store located near the main street in Korea Town, the man is setting in the middle of his store. Every light is turned off except the lights shinning him. He is wearing khiakis, a white shirt and a tie. He started to recall that day and started to exaplian what happened in Korea Town. He looks exgested and tired while saying quickly but heavily.when he was talking about everyone was shooting to everywhere, he started to shrinking his body several times. And it was upsurged when he explained that he said “Don’t shoot”and everybody pointed guns to him.  He seems like lose his hope and at the end of the conversation, he was barely fighting back his tears. 

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