The first thing I want you to do is plagiarism, there a lot of sentences that needs to be restated in order to avoid plagiarism. I have attached my Annotated bibliography and I need you to make it longer. each source should have two paragraphs a summery approximately 100 word and an evaluation approximately 200 word. Therefor, the AB should have 11 paragraphs 10 for the sources and 1 for the introduction. I don't want to write a new AB but I only need you to improve it half the work is already done. I also have attached an example for you to see.
Your annotated bibliography should contain the following elements:
What is your topic? Why did you choose it? Why is it important?
How are your sources related to your topic? How are your sources related to each other?
A reference entry
Use APA citation.
Do not create a separate reference page.
If applicable, what are the research question(s) and findings?
What are the main points of the source?
Do not be too specific; use roughly 100 words.
Is this source reliable? Why or why not?
If applicable, do you agree with the argument/findings the author made? Why or why not?
How is this source related to your topic? How is it helpful to you? If applicable, how does it help you narrow down your topic?
How does this source support or disagree with your other sources?
What questions does this source leave unanswered?
Be concise; use roughly 200 words.