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UmarAutobiographical Essay (3-5 Pages)
Goals and Objectives
One of the purposes of 101 is to teach the process of thoughtful analysis. In the case of the Autobiographical Essay, through narrative, either explicitly or implicitly, you will form an analysis of your own experiences and their relationships to everyday life, in much the same way as your research paper analyzes world trends and relates them to the lives of others.
Purpose
The purpsose of the autobiographical essay is twofold, and in many ways resembles the purpose of the research essay. Just like the research essay, your task is to 1) inform and 2) analyze the subject in question—the major difference here is that the subject in question is your own life. Unlike diary writing or personal writing, the autobiographical essay isn't just for your own personal understanding, but a piece of writing targeted at entertaining and enlightening your audience.
So just as you wouldn't write a researched essay with research only and no argument or analysis, so too are not allowed to merely relate a sequence of events without commentary, reflection, or analysis. Ideally, this reflection will be a subtle quality, hidden just under the surface that conveys what the core meaning of the essay is. For example, an essay like David Sedaris's Me Talk Pretty One Day is, on the surface, about surffering French lessons from a tyrnnacal teachers, but what the story is really about is incredible effort and eventual joy that comes with learning a new language.
Why is this particular event important to you? How did it change your view of the world? And what can we, as readers, learn from your experience? You should not address these questions explicitly in a “tacked-on” piece of reflection at the end of the essay, but they should be an organic part of the essay. In a good personal essay, the writer’s point is embedded in the narrative itself. Another feature of a personal essay is the use well-chosen, concrete details that show meaning rather than telling about it.
Checklist
1. A personal essay is written in the first person (using “I”) and the past tense (since it can only have happened in the past).
2. Essays must be free from cliche. If you find that your essay has smiliar themes and events to a movie, it won't feel as real and honest, and it feel seem more as if you are copying what you see on TV than that you are seriosuly refelecting on your own life.
3. Follow a clear narrative pattern (chronological, flashbacks, etc.).
4. Focus on one central event (within 1-3 scenes only).
5. Maintain a clear central focus (either explicit or implied).
6. Include realistic dialogue.
7. Include vivid, descriptive details relevant to the essay.
What Should My Essay Be About?
Some of us have lived exciting lives, others have not. Thankfully, when it comes to writing, all of us are equals. We will read about war, but we will also read about playing video games about war, showing that great skill can make even the most mundane and boring sections of life fascinating just as poor craft can make even the most exciting premise fall flat.
In other words: It's not what you write about, it's how you write about it.
For example, a mundane “Day at School” could be the time your pants fell down in the middle of gym class, but not the time the gym caught fire and you barely survived. In everyday life, there are all sorts of moments in which small but significant ethical dilemmas, interpersonal relationships, and truths about the world are revealed.
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Sample Prompt:
The Third Most Interesting Thing That Ever Happened to You
Not the most interesting thing, or the second most interesting thing. The third most interesting thing. Much like researched essays are easier to write when they are not about the standard list of controversal issues, so too are autobiographical essays easier to write when they are not about: Death, illness, personal tragedy, inspiring sports stories, use of illicit substances, and engagement in illegal activities (the last two are for your sake rather than mine).